so sacred
December 2nd, 2005it is with
a lightness
that i whisper your name…
it is your
kindness
that surrounds me…
can it be
that our friendship
is eternal?
like the stars
we gaze upon
on this cool, clear night…
the briskness
of the air, so fresh
and gentle upon my face…
looking up at
the vastness of the universe…
looking straight up
into infinite divinity…
realizing that we
are but a moment in time
yet, time so precious…
so sacred…
© 2005 Carlos Rull


December 2nd, 2005 at 6:54 pm
so precious…
so sacred…
That words lose meaning and shape.
That time stands in silence
and silence is happiness.
. . .so sorry to add those in, but your poem is so beautiful I felt it had to go on and on. I can imagine your poem continuing forever. Lovely poem.
Take care.
December 3rd, 2005 at 1:36 pm
thanks once again. i like what you wrote. glad it inspired you to add more words!!! :)
take care, and hope your holiday season is going well!